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If you wanted me to go
Uncluttered Without suitcase or Resentment, I would; Take a locomotive To your insecurities, Pay my own way Blood/letting Tickets from veins. I am your passenger, Tourist of your every Journey. To Selves l. She wants me Too Hand over Delicate things. I Have a hard time Holding this Slippery pride, And it has Like favorite fabrics Curved to the contours Of my being, Yet still Manages to Get away. What would she need Such menacing material for?- It doesn’t keep me warm, Does not keep me company, Will not caress Or fill an empty night With love. Pride is pretty Use/less. Here. ll. What is between us Short of Opportunity Have I confused a kiss With a bridge? Has she mystified distance And danced armless into a dream? Where are our hands- We must get a grip, Pull the seams of these Drifting continents And suture our world- Why does falling in love cause death- Are we asleep? My I Your I My I Opened. |
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Very nice poem.
Title suggestion---Delicate Things |
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I Like that
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How about
"Checklist" |
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checklist isnt bad...still like delicate things better
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Special Treasures
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Useless Pride
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