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well today i was looking at my blurb and didnt really fell satisfied by it. i decided to rewrite it and be a little more straight forward with it. Tell me, what is your impression of it? Brutal honesty is preferred over sugar coated words.
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"I've been to many different places in my life. Some good, some not so good. Many mistakes have been made but I appreciate the learning experiences created from these mistakes. There is no better teacher than experience."
I dig your profile---I love the honesty. My favorite part I quoted above as it is so true and many can relate to that exact statement. I know I can. |
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"I've been to many different places in my life. Some good, some not so good. Many mistakes have been made but I appreciate the learning experiences created from these mistakes. There is no better teacher than experience." I dig your profile---I love the honesty. My favorite part I quoted above as it is so true and many can relate to that exact statement. I know I can. thank you very much |
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It is very nice.
I can't recall what it said before. You have laid it all out I think. Sorry the dang job is cutting into your band time :-) Lucky little girl. Great profile, even though you are not turned to the side :-) |
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It is very nice. I can't recall what it said before. You have laid it all out I think. Sorry the dang job is cutting into your band time :-) Lucky little girl. Great profile, even though you are not turned to the side :-) thank you very much, and though the band may not survive, i still got a plan to compose songs on my own and maybe find a band to back them up in live settings while i'm in. |
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just wanna say thank you to those who replied
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You are most welcome.
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