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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 05/09/10 07:26 PM
IF loving you is wrong, I shall forever wonder along. Life and living, will forever miss my eyes and mind. You took me a lifetime to really find. Love can never again be felt through this heart. If your not inside mine with me, as my biggest part. I know what I have been through, just like you. And never has any love felt more natural, so unbelievably true. IF loving you is wrong, then you would not be in my mind so strong. Every chance, into every romance, is a celebration of visual dance. Any life worth its living, starts through this internal giving. An opportunity to paint our own pictures of each new day to see. Me by your side, and you beside me. Together to share a most perfect, harmony!

zanne46 Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5610	Sun 05/09/10 08:25 PM
very nice write Terry.... xo

myssfytz Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 14460	Sun 05/09/10 08:30 PM
Niice.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 05/10/10 01:10 AM


kdough Joined Sun 02/21/10 Posts: 86	Mon 05/10/10 12:25 PM
I love this Terry,you make me SMILE in so MANY ways,wish ya was BESIDE ME EVERYDAY... Karen

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 05/11/10 07:26 AM
d write T....and what a great pic of you and your Mom...please give her a hug for me.

Sashalynn Joined Sat 02/27/10 Posts: 57	Tue 05/11/10 07:26 PM
Terry, With every word you tugged at the corners of my heart, you played the strings like a fine tuned violin knowing every key to perfection. Sometimes I find myself unable to breath when I read what you share with us, (the lucky ones)! You are so gifted and so unbelievably sweet, thank you again for sharring your heart with us. You have a beautiful soul!! Your Freind, Sasha

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 05/09/11 09:27 PM
Terry, With every word you tugged at the corners of my heart, you played the strings like a fine tuned violin knowing every key to perfection. Sometimes I find myself unable to breath when I read what you share with us, (the lucky ones)! You are so gifted and so unbelievably sweet, thank you again for sharring your heart with us. You have a beautiful soul!! Your Freind, Sasha Sometimes in life Sasha,,ONE OVER-LOOKS what THEY SHOULD HAVE SEEN...and KNOW,,,and for THIS,,,,I WAS WRONG..... I turned the wrong way to look,,,,,,,,NOTHING shall ever CHANGE THAT I HOPE and PRAY you've found LOVE and LIVING in THIS HARMONY!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 05/13/11 07:35 AM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 05/16/11 05:48 PM
I guess through life as we try,,and we have some issues with how or what we think AT THAT TIME,,it shadows everything we look back to begin again.....Thanks for all your attentions you have expressed to me on this sight and through our friendships. May God always light your path, feed your heart and shield your fears...Be always Blessed for the woman God has allowed you to become... ...

Tessa02 Joined Tue 02/16/10 Posts: 2519	Mon 05/16/11 07:06 PM
Beautiful!!! Always love your writings!!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 05/17/11 11:26 PM
I guess through life as we try,,and we have some issues with how or what we think AT THAT TIME,,it shadows everything we look back to begin again.....Thanks for all your attentions you have expressed to me on this sight and through our friendships. May God always light your path, feed your heart and shield your fears...Be always Blessed for the woman God has allowed you to become... ... (((( T ))))) to us and our friendship.. Blessed be.. blessed be

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 05/18/11 01:48 AM
Beautiful!!! Always love your writings!! TY Tess,,,,,always very kind to me in your words,,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 05/18/11 01:50 AM
I guess through life as we try,,and we have some issues with how or what we think AT THAT TIME,,it shadows everything we look back to begin again.....Thanks for all your attentions you have expressed to me on this sight and through our friendships. May God always light your path, feed your heart and shield your fears...Be always Blessed for the woman God has allowed you to become... ... (((( T ))))) to us and our friendship.. Blessed be.. blessed be Days are long,,nights stand still. Never forgetting, a week of blissful thrill.. How lives meet, how life defeats, yet,,so very sweet, To you.