Topic: what more shold i do ?
bobjah's photo
Sun 05/09/10 03:49 PM
this is so new to me im lost?

StillLooking29's photo
Sun 05/09/10 03:56 PM
Spell check and punctuation

MelodyGirl's photo
Sun 05/09/10 04:12 PM
Edited by MelodyGirl on Sun 05/09/10 04:20 PM
Hi waving

I'll bet you can answer your own question!

Here is your essay:

"i am a single gut like to have fun in many way love watching movies fishing up for anything"

slaphead You have multiple errors! It looks like a 3rd grader wrote your essay.

Your essay is a reflection of you; it's also your first impression.

You are a single “GUT?” laugh If you were a girl, would that attract you? :angel:

I would add more information. Fill out ALL of your statics. Include your goals and what type of girl is of interest to you. Write an essay that stands above the hundreds of other profiles. If your essay is boring – one might assume you are boring.

More pictures will help too! :thumbsup:

Here is a rewrite of your current essay if you want to copy and paste this to edit your profile.

I am a single guy, and I like to have fun in many ways. I love watching movies, fishing, and I am up for anything.

Joining the forums is the best bet. Trolling the profiles and relying on email replies is not only frustrating but it’s not productive.

Have fun! :banana:

bobjah's photo
Mon 05/10/10 09:31 AM
Thank you so very much.You are so sweet.

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Mon 05/10/10 09:33 AM
Welcome and good luck flowers

MelodyGirl's photo
Mon 05/10/10 10:14 AM

Thank you so very much.You are so sweet.


flowerforyou

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Mon 05/10/10 10:41 AM
Melody is as sweet as it gets!!flowerforyou