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Topic: can I,,,?
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/12/10 06:59 PM
Can I barrow your smile, if I let you use mine? Can I barrow your hand, If I give you mine? Can I barrow your kiss, If I give you my lips? Can I barrow your heart, If I give you mine? Can I barrow you forever, If I give you my, forever?

silverlight Joined Tue 03/30/10 Posts: 7	Mon 04/12/10 07:02 PM
Nice

Tessa02 Joined Tue 02/16/10 Posts: 2519	Mon 04/12/10 07:04 PM
Really great write!!!

dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Mon 04/12/10 07:40 PM
I hope you don't mind if I say this is very sweet!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 04/13/10 05:40 PM
silverlight, Nice. Thank you silver,,and welcome to poems.. Tessa02 Really great write!!! Thanks Tess, its in one's mind,,,here....lol dnc4Him I hope you don't mind if I say this is very sweet! Dancer,,,I don't MIND,,a bit,,YOUR reply was SWEET!! Thank you,,

Queene123 Joined Tue 06/26/07 Posts: 17056	Tue 04/13/10 06:19 PM
Can I barrow your smile, if I let you use mine? Can I barrow your hand, If I give you mine? Can I barrow your kiss, If I give you my lips? Can I barrow your heart, If I give you mine? Can I barrow you forever, If I give you my, forever? adding to your poem can i borrow your smile of happines so i can ease your sorrow of pain let me comfort you in the time of need and have no worries that tend to come to mind as you can borrow my heart anytime as you shall know as i will be there at the sped of light

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