Topic: For a brief time
Shadowfax1961's photo
Sun 04/11/10 05:07 PM
For a brief time
they gathered secret treasures,
shared and laughed and dreamed
like children,
oblivious of the next minute.

Lucky are the children:
not yet tarnished by caution, questions, regret.
No memories to tear them apart.
No suspicions for them to doubt.
A garden to call their own.

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Sun 04/11/10 05:14 PM
flowerforyou Very nice write,,and Welcome to poems..

Shadowfax1961's photo
Sun 04/11/10 05:28 PM
Thanks

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Sun 04/11/10 05:37 PM
I :heart: it, and I totally agree. flowerforyou

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Sun 04/11/10 06:09 PM
Welcomeflowerforyou

Queene123's photo
Sun 04/11/10 09:03 PM

For a brief time
they gathered secret treasures,
shared and laughed and dreamed
like children,
oblivious of the next minute.

Lucky are the children:
not yet tarnished by caution, questions, regret.
No memories to tear them apart.
No suspicions for them to doubt.
A garden to call their own.



adding to your poem

children gather with secerts
in there hands and not open to eye
of who is else around
as they all have doubts of who
one they can trust. as the savior
has given them a heart and soul
and to learn from each one
mistake
as its brief time for one to show
they still belong in the tunnel
of light untill one is ready to reborn