Topic: Need a poem
jharter2123's photo
Fri 06/15/07 06:58 PM
Hey everyone...Im lookin for a poem to send to a guy to let him know
that I truly care for him...with all my heart...we are friends...best
friends and lately its been more. Everytime he and I go out...it feels
like more and I want to show him or tell him how I feel. Can anyone
help me?

Thank you!


(oh and for the few people on here who know me and that think they know
who I am talking about...your wrong) Dont want to sound mean...just had
to get that out of the way...
flowerforyou flowerforyou

angelintraining's photo
Fri 06/15/07 07:08 PM
I wrote this for a great guy I know... baby if you are reading this I
love you so much.


The hardest part is through,
I have already fallen for you.
I can’t believe what I have done,
I finally went and found the one.
I can finally come clean,
I need you for my everything.
The one that I always kiss goodnight,
The one that I see in the sunlight.
We started out as friends,
Now I hope it never ends.
I know you'll never make me cry,
I know I never want to hear goodbye.
I can't imagine my life without you.
My world would be so blue.
When we are standing face to face,
I will feel your love as we embrace.
Just one kiss, one hug, one touch,
That would truly mean so much.
To be able to look into your eyes,
To know I am not hearing a bunch of lies.
I only hope when you look into my eyes,
That somewhere deep down your realize,
Just exactly how much it is true,
That I am totally in love with you.


s1owhand's photo
Fri 06/15/07 07:22 PM
i have a suggestion - just write 5 or 10 lines about how you feel when
you think of him...i guarantee that whatever you write will be special
to him always.

:heart:

it always is

s1owhand's photo
Fri 06/15/07 07:29 PM
However - if you must search to find another's expression of your
sentiment then you can also try:

http://www.poetry-online.org/index.htm

incidentally, i liked angelintraining's poem very much. thank you for
sharing it, and it would be a lovely choice for the occasion :smile:

jharter2123's photo
Fri 06/15/07 07:33 PM
I did love the poem...thank you! it was amazing...I wish i could write
like that...hahaha

s1owhand's photo
Fri 06/15/07 07:44 PM
what you write is special not for the words you use

it is special simply because they are your own

:heart:

sandylou2456's photo
Fri 06/15/07 08:02 PM



I agree with Slowhand. Anything that you would write would mean so much
to him, knowing they were your own word and would be very *special* to
him.....sandy

jharter2123's photo
Fri 06/15/07 08:52 PM
thanks everyone...its been hard but i will try to write my own...i may
pass it on to you all before i pass it on to him...just so you can see
if you like it...hahha