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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/30/10 07:24 PM
Tender is the night, I lay awake in bed. My mind takes flight. Thinking of your sweet words to me, Tonight when you said,'we'! Emails and on the phone. We have now become, each others alone. Always talking, about everything! No-longer feeling empty and dull. We live for each other's phone call. What started out to be some helpful advice. Has turned into this feeling inside, so nice. Thoughts now of you holding me tight, Of us together, sharing our night. No promises made, our hearts wide open. We're just two kids again, wishin and hope-en. That love can find the same place, inside you and me. Where You and I Both want to refer to us, as,, 'WE'.......

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Tue 03/30/10 07:26 PM
Nice write, (((Terry))) I like this very much!! Thank you for sharing this

dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Tue 03/30/10 07:26 PM
very cool! congratulations?

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 03/30/10 07:36 PM
very cool! congratulations? I write with a VERY GREAT imagination,,,,, and MUCH ,,,,,but its tender thoughts of my real life SOME DAY,,,I just really do know THAT and FEEL"""THAT"""",,in this I wrote tonight.. Thank you dnc4HIM... BIG HUGS...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 03/30/10 08:02 PM
tender is the... we. sweet write.

Queene123 Joined Tue 06/26/07 Posts: 17056	Tue 03/30/10 08:20 PM
Tender is the night, I lay awake in bed. My mind takes flight. Thinking of your sweet words to me, Tonight when you said,'we'! Emails and on the phone. We have now become, each others alone. Always talking, about everything! No-longer feeling empty and dull. We live for each other's phone call. What started out to be some helpful advice. Has turned into this feeling inside, so nice. Thoughts now of you holding me tight, Of us together, sharing our night. No promises made, our hearts wide open. We're just two kids again, wishin and hope-en. That love can find the same place, inside you and me. Where You and I Both want to refer to us, as,, 'WE'....... adding to your poem i lay awake and listen to birds sing the morning songs and listen to the ecos of the thunderstorms listening to everyone complain that there is no one in sight to be there mate but holding on to each other as friendship can not only mean you have a empty spot in your heart for you have a full filling one that you tend to share with others around

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 03/31/10 04:25 AM
gentle. just a warm, feel good write!

LightVoice Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 7405	Wed 03/31/10 07:03 AM
aaaaaaaaaawww {{Terry}}.. so sweet! I will never, ever, feel the same about the word "We" now.. Thank you!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 03/31/10 07:06 AM
Very enjoyable read (((T)))

Sashalynn Joined Sat 02/27/10 Posts: 57	Wed 03/31/10 01:12 PM
Terry, You need to be published.... You are so good! What a gift you have. Do not give up there is always hope. And please do not ever stop writing. What a sad day that would be. Sash

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Wed 03/31/10 01:19 PM
Oh so lovely! Great write for sure.

vikrnle Joined Wed 01/27/10 Posts: 493	Wed 03/31/10 01:47 PM
You run deep Dude.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 03/31/10 05:15 PM
Terry, You need to be published.... You are so good! What a gift you have. Do not give up there is always hope. And please do not ever stop writing. What a sad day that would be. Sash Do you have any idea,,just how much you swell a man's head. and make him feel so great,,lol,,THANK YOU sash...and truly you make me feel,,my words do touch people,,,and THAT,,,means the MOST to my time and heart writing them.TY,,..

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 03/31/10 05:17 PM
tender is the... we. sweet write. Thank you sweety,,,and I STILL love then tennie's,,,,lol,,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 03/31/10 05:21 PM
aaaaaaaaaawww {{Terry}}.. so sweet! I will never, ever, feel the same about the word "We" now.. Thank you! I wish one thing for you in this life lightvoice,,that YOU find a man who MAKES YOU ALWAYS WANT TO SAY WE,,,,,as well as HE to feel that for YOU...WE IS ALL ABOUT-------TWO,,never just ONE,wink Thank you so for always replying with such a sweet thought for my words,,,HUGS,,

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 03/31/10 05:33 PM
Nice write, (((Terry))) I like this very much!! Thank you for sharing this Ahhhh,red,,THANKS for your SWEET words,,,,, gentle. just a warm, feel good write! Thank you for expressing what you felt,,that was my thought also when writing it,,,,hugs Bastet... Oh so lovely! Great write for sure. MzEm,,,thanks so much for reading and letting me know you liked this,,,,thanks,,,hugs,, Very enjoyable read (((T))) Twokids,,,YOU are so NICE,,,thank you for reading,,,and I hope your having a GREAT week,,,hugs.. You run deep Dude,,,Vikrnle,,,,YES,,,lol,,I think I MIGHT BE,,wink, YOU,,,are my number one fan, little missy,,wink,,,THANK YOU SO!!! adding to your poem.......Queen,,,??I GUESS you liked it then???lol

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Wed 03/31/10 05:36 PM
Actually, now that I am reading this again, it applies to me now, believe it or not!! I think I may be 'off the market'!! I'll find out next weekend!