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Topic: MOONLIGHT MATINEE
bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 05:29 PM
we lay in embrace,gazing at the stars, your skin feels electric in my hand. caressing your body with my mind as our toes rest in the sand. sounds of the night waft peacefully by, very soothing,like magic to our ears, our hearts beats to the cosmos's drum the feeling of love,to our eyes,bring a tear. pulsing with bliss and harmony like a dance in the perfect play we entwine our souls and become one in our moonlight matinee...

Pata Joined Sat 07/07/07 Posts: 23705	Tue 03/30/10 05:46 PM
Very sweet bedlum.......... would be so nice to have a connectin like that with someone.....

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 05:49 PM
Very sweet bedlum.......... would be so nice to have a connectin like that with someone..... its just a dream for now...maybe someday

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 05:52 PM
Very sweet bedlum.......... would be so nice to have a connectin like that with someone..... its just a dream for now...maybe someday maybe i should have titled it.......wishful thinking...

Sneaksintoyourheart Joined Fri 10/16/09 Posts: 19261	Tue 03/30/10 05:52 PM
good read again i still enjoy reading what ya right

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 05:53 PM
good read again i still enjoy reading what ya right thank you sweety.

Ladylid2012 Joined Sun 07/05/09 Posts: 42269	Tue 03/30/10 05:55 PM
Very sweet bedlum.......... would be so nice to have a connectin like that with someone..... ditto

Sneaksintoyourheart Joined Fri 10/16/09 Posts: 19261	Tue 03/30/10 05:56 PM
good read again i still enjoy reading what ya right thank you sweety. yw any time

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 05:57 PM
Very sweet bedlum.......... would be so nice to have a connectin like that with someone..... ditto LL...your a sweetheart

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 06:22 PM
any takers????????? ((kicks a pebble and walks away empty feeling )) .lol

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Tue 03/30/10 06:29 PM
that just felt magically delicious!! so nice!!

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 06:33 PM
that just felt magically delicious!! so nice!! isnt that how its supposed to feel....???

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Tue 03/30/10 06:36 PM
that just felt magically delicious!! so nice!! isnt that how its supposed to feel....??? oh, without a doubt, 110%, absolutely, yes!! it was perfect!!

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 06:42 PM
that just felt magically delicious!! so nice!! isnt that how its supposed to feel....??? oh, without a doubt, 110%, absolutely, yes!! it was perfect!! good...whew!!!...thought i was the only one who thinks that way about things....lol

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Tue 03/30/10 06:57 PM
that just felt magically delicious!! so nice!! isnt that how its supposed to feel....??? oh, without a doubt, 110%, absolutely, yes!! it was perfect!! good...whew!!!...thought i was the only one who thinks that way about things....lol okay, truly, it is beyond words, but if you could put it to words, you did that!

Sneaksintoyourheart Joined Fri 10/16/09 Posts: 19261	Tue 03/30/10 06:58 PM
I think he can put it into much stronger words

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Tue 03/30/10 06:58 PM
that just felt magically delicious!! so nice!! isnt that how its supposed to feel....??? oh, without a doubt, 110%, absolutely, yes!! it was perfect!! good...whew!!!...thought i was the only one who thinks that way about things....lol okay, truly, it is beyond words, but if you could put it to words, you did that! your so sweet...thank you

LightVoice Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 7405	Wed 03/31/10 07:00 AM
very VERY nice! ... you already know I love your gift of words.. I find it so easy to get lost in them.. and for a moment I was looking up at the stars too my favorite line: caressing your body with my mind ... oh baby! like that! lol

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Wed 03/31/10 09:56 AM
very VERY nice! ... you already know I love your gift of words.. I find it so easy to get lost in them.. and for a moment I was looking up at the stars too my favorite line: caressing your body with my mind ... oh baby! like that! lol yeah i personally liked that line myself thank you...i try to paint a picture

redhead44613 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 12976	Wed 03/31/10 11:45 AM
wow..very good. Love it!! But I have to ask...did you have anyone in mind when you wrote it or is it just wishing?