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dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Sun 03/28/10 12:37 PM
Your face is ever before me At times it is all I can see Smiling, full of love for me Gently stealing my sanity Will I ever be free? Your arms I feel around me Embracing me tenderly Their warmth completely surrounds me Blocking the coldness of reality Will I ever be free? Your voice I hear unmistakably Whispering softly, sweetly All the things you would say to me If only it could be! Will I ever be free? My heart cries out desparately This question, persistent haunts me Exhausting me, waking me The answer echoes back to me Only when you choose to be......

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 03/28/10 01:23 PM
not an easy thing to choose sometimes, very real write

FETTS61 Joined Sat 08/18/07 Posts: 31425	Sun 03/28/10 01:45 PM
You really are awesome, LaVerne

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 03/28/10 01:47 PM
Your face is ever before me At times it is all I can see Smiling, full of love for me Gently stealing my sanity Will I ever be free? Your arms I feel around me Embracing me tenderly Their warmth completely surrounds me Blocking the coldness of reality Will I ever be free? Your voice I hear unmistakably Whispering softly, sweetly All the things you would say to me If only it could be! Will I ever be free? My heart cries out desparately This question, persistent haunts me Exhausting me, waking me The answer echoes back to me Only when you choose to be...... Believe in your heart to find me. Embrace in your mind to want me. Allow your walls of fears, to trust me. Only then can we both ever truly, come-to-BE. Dnc4HIM, This is really Beautiful and from your heart. As each one of us travels this same road, we open up and let-go of what has placed us HERE, and writing helps for this expression to be part of US ALL,,releasing and excepting all that we have become Now,,and desire to come to be...I PRAY YOU FIND PEACE AND THE RIGHT MAN TO HELP YOU IN YOUR JOURNEY TO HIM...MAY GOD'S LIGHT ALWAYS SHINE ON YOU, AND HELP GUIDE YOUR WAY..

dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Sun 03/28/10 02:00 PM
not an easy thing to choose sometimes, very real write Yes, you're right. It was a death, not a break up, and for me I think that makes it harder.

dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Sun 03/28/10 02:00 PM
You really are awesome, LaVerne Thank you! and you are very sweet!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 03/28/10 02:02 PM
not an easy thing to choose sometimes, very real write Yes, you're right. It was a death, not a break up, and for me I think that makes it harder. oh i'm so sorry and yes that is a much harder reality. love and light to you.

dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Sun 03/28/10 02:03 PM
Believe in your heart to find me. Embrace in your mind to want me. Allow your walls of fears, to trust me. Only then can we both ever truly, come-to-BE. Dnc4HIM, This is really Beautiful and from your heart. As each one of us travels this same road, we open up and let-go of what has placed us HERE, and writing helps for this expression to be part of US ALL,,releasing and excepting all that we have become Now,,and desire to come to be...I PRAY YOU FIND PEACE AND THE RIGHT MAN TO HELP YOU IN YOUR JOURNEY TO HIM...MAY GOD'S LIGHT ALWAYS SHINE ON YOU, AND HELP GUIDE YOUR WAY.. Terry, you're a true poet at heart! Thank you for your kind words and encouragement!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 03/28/10 04:11 PM
Terry, you're a true poet at heart! Thank you for your kind words and encouragement! I told you THIS in private,,as I now shall state it for the world to read. YOU ARE VERY SWEET IN PERSONALITY AND VERY BEAUTIFUL, YOU WOULD BE ANY MANS BEST TO HAVE AT HIS SIDE!!!!! I never talk BS,,,in private or on here,,if I'm being REAL. And truly you are in my mind,,,ALL THAT!!!! SO THERE!!