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His words seduced her
Spoken quietly, deeply Through years of Smoke, alcohol dull She leaned forward With all her 48 years To hear this messiah of words An old soul, a young boy Scorned and scarred Soured on what he Thought he knew She read right through The valium haze Words tumbling down Between two lips that Anticipated a coming That never was A chemical reaction An extraction of two A quick embrace With awkward goodbyes Made in haste He walked away On unsteady legs Full of sin and gin Fighting a battle within She hoped he'd win |
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Very nice.
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awesome
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VERY NICE INDEED............
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"i like that"
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 I so LOVE truth and poem,,THIS was great into BOTH..thanks
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nice write
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Very nice.
thanks kindly
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jimz
35TOO s1ow T burgundy Thank you all for your comments. There much appreciated.
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you're welcome
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jimz 35TOO s1ow T burgundy Thank you all for your comments. They're much appreciated.
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lovely Pam
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yellowrose-nice to see you in this part of the forums
LeighAnna- I appreciate your comments.
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an arrow into my
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Nice write.....
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nice again
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Ladylid-
nice to know I'm not the only one
Mystique- thanks and it's nice to see you
kc- much appreciated
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That was touching.
I dated a very troubled man a few years back. He was an alcoholic and had lots of problems. It was so sad to let him go. I tried to "fix him" but couldn't. Thank you for sharing.
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That was touching. I dated a very troubled man a few years back. He was an alcoholic and had lots of problems. It was so sad to let him go. I tried to "fix him" but couldn't. Thank you for sharing.
Fixing someone never works-no one has that power over someone else. Thanks for commenting.
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