| Topic: Peace, lad. | |
|---|---|
| 
     
      I write about the winter ways
 
  with no foresight or thought; and haunt away what bitter rays of hope lay to be bought. Around the streets, beneath the signs a howl stings the air. And even though you didn't know - although I know it isn't fair - I have to give direction, darling; sweetness for the masses. Yes, my doll, you're such a scarred thing; the flesh, a death that passes. But winter winds can sing their sin; I will write about their lies. And bleed so sweet within the thin accompaniment of highs. An autumn death would would be the best. Your February aches me; but I write rhymes that mesmerize and rest just as I should be. Erase the son, erase the sin, the cycle starts again. I wanted more to emphasize the sorrow in the spin. That, Michael, we aren't where we live, but where we empathize.  | 
|
| 
     | 
|
| 
     
      some truly wonderful lines here... 
    
     | 
|
| 
     | 
|
| 
     
      Thanks. *smile*
     
   | 
|
| 
     | 
|
| 
     
      Beautiful as usual, really hard to say much more with your writing plastic...but as always, a pleasure to read.
     
   | 
|
| 
     | 
|
| 
     
      Thanks, man.
     
   | 
|
| 
     | 
|
| 
     
      You have a true & unique talent.... 
    
     | 
|
| 
     | 
|
| 
     
      *hug*  
    
     | 
|
| 
     | 
|
| 
     
      I hate using the same trite comments over and over "fantastic, beautiful, fabulous, awesome, great, nice." 
 
  So imagine me applauding instead. And then giving a standing ovation.           
     | 
|
| 
     | 
|

