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inspired by kc's Acuity
=-=-=-=-= the sun sets on a line squeegees this blue orb one side wiped with black paint slumber follows oozing along behind the valleys fall first they are already lower then the slopes and rock needles pricking little flashes the very last rays bounce away then dark yet all along the line the unending circle light touches for the first time in half a day warming all gently running liquid energy into deep recesses and shallow pools awakening life ears prick up something's different listen |
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thank you s1ow
very nice indeed... |
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nice
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alright cool
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meant to put an image with it...
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too late, take it back!
(i already had an image) |
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Hahahaha...I like yours better.
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