Topic: unending circle
s1owhand's photo
Sun 02/21/10 08:42 AM
inspired by kc's Acuity

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the sun sets on a line
squeegees this blue orb
one side wiped with black paint
slumber follows
oozing along behind

the valleys fall first
they are already lower
then the slopes and rock needles
pricking little flashes
the very last rays
bounce away
then
dark

yet all along the line
the unending circle
light touches for the first time
in half a day
warming all gently
running liquid energy
into deep recesses and shallow pools

awakening life
ears prick up

something's different
listen

s1owhand's photo
Sun 02/21/10 11:48 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8jne-YvGI4

kc0003's photo
Sun 02/21/10 02:51 PM
thank you s1ow

very nice indeed...drinker

no photo
Sun 02/21/10 03:45 PM
niceflowerforyou flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 02/21/10 05:21 PM
alright cooldrinker

s1owhand's photo
Sun 02/21/10 10:20 PM
meant to put an image with it...




kc0003's photo
Sun 02/21/10 10:28 PM
too late, take it back!

(i already had an image)

s1owhand's photo
Mon 02/22/10 09:27 AM
Hahahaha...I like yours better.

drinker