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Edited by
iam4u
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Fri 02/12/10 10:37 PM
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Come, lets lay on our backs in a field.
Waiting for the stars and moon to yield. Lets run naked on the beach, Building castles, as the ocean waves try to reach. Lets feel sorry for nothing, And happiness for everything! Let us laugh at tomorrow, While everyone else, drowns in their sorrow. Lets forget we even have any past. And just make our time together, forever last. I want you to laugh so hard you'll cry, So I can laugh so hard I'll die. Let us float just like a feather, Whenever we our together. Lets cut each-other some slack, as we scratch each others back. Lets stop wasting time today, doing this all, right away. Well, come-on. What shall you say?  Today? |
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Nice write.
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Nice write. |
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Very cool.
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Very cool.  well,,,a fool at any thought! 
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cool
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cool Thanks Jimmy!!!
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I LIKE IT ALOT...
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You are a treasure, a gift that keeps on giving. I love your writing even when they come from pain they are so real, so full of life and they give us hope...... |
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Edited by
vikrnle
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Sun 03/21/10 12:56 PM
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You must be love with someone, your poems says it all.
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Edited by
iam4u
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Sun 03/21/10 07:17 PM
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You must be love with someone, your poems says it all. ONE THING on this site that YOU SHALL NEVER SEE FROM ME. Is a LIE,,,,so,,,,with THAT SAID,,,NO,,I have always wrote passionate poems or writes,,must from my dreams, some from memories of lived experiences, and MANY only from the heart ache I carry, inside WANTING to find in THE REAL LIVING and SHARING of a lady who has that feeling for ME...BUT as yet,,,NO ONE IN MY LIFE!!!!! And I only WISH, I could say there was one.. Thanks so much for all the replies and I have had many THINK that about me here,,so its no biggy,,just like being real and honest always as to where I am in life and single or taken,,as I am Single all the way around that field,,,lol 
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what can I say....? i think i need your words to be able to appreciate your words!
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what can I say....? i think i need your words to be able to appreciate your words! from YOU!!!!!!!!!  Thank you..4him,,,wink |
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Come, lets lay on our backs in a field. Waiting for the stars and moon to yield. Lets run naked on the beach, Building castles, as the ocean waves try to reach. Lets feel sorry for nothing, And happiness for everything! Let us laugh at tomorrow, While everyone else, drowns in their sorrow. Lets forget we even have any past. And just make our time together, forever last. I want you to laugh so hard you'll cry, So I can laugh so hard I'll die. Let us float just like a feather, Whenever we our together. Lets cut each-other some slack, as we scratch each others back. Lets stop wasting time today, doing this all, right away. Well, come-on. What shall you say? Today? added to your poem lets rejoin the laughter we had cherish in the time before as we walk on the beach and see the sunset from afar and watch the moon go down behind the mountains the beauty of the colors look so sound. as showing your happiness through your sense of humor the warmth of your jokes. makes it all worth while as the past is the past and today and tomorrow is the future. as the time stands still we laugh, cry untill no where else to turn. as the stars we look and wish upon a brighter and new beganing as runing through the waves and sands in our toes. shows that were still children in some degree in our hearts. |
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whimsical ~ just made me smile!
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