Come, lets lay on our backs in a field.
Waiting for the stars and moon to yield.
Lets run naked on the beach,
Building castles, as the ocean waves try to reach.
Lets feel sorry for nothing,
And happiness for everything!
Let us laugh at tomorrow,
While everyone else, drowns in their sorrow.
Lets forget we even have any past.
And just make our time together, forever last.
I want you to laugh so hard you'll cry,
So I can laugh so hard I'll die.
Let us float just like a feather,
Whenever we our together.
Lets cut each-other some slack,
as we scratch each others back.
Lets stop wasting time today,
doing this all, right away.
Well, come-on.
What shall you say?
Today?

Nice write.

Thanks,,,its late, and my mind wakes,,,go figure!! lol..

Very cool.

Thanks Indigo, I'm a fool for cool,,,,,
well,,,a fool at any thought!

cool

Only when used as my tool,,,,lol

Thanks Jimmy!!!

I LIKE IT ALOT...

You are a treasure, a gift that keeps on giving.
I love your writing even when they come from pain they are so real, so full of life and they give us hope......

You must be love with someone, your poems says it all.

ONE THING on this site that YOU SHALL NEVER SEE FROM ME.
Is a LIE,,,,so,,,,with THAT SAID,,,NO,,I have always wrote passionate poems or writes,,must from my dreams, some from memories of lived experiences, and MANY only from the heart ache I carry, inside WANTING to find in THE REAL LIVING and SHARING of a lady who has that feeling for ME...BUT as yet,,,NO ONE IN MY LIFE!!!!!

And I only WISH, I could say there was one..

Thanks so much for all the replies and I have had many THINK that about me here,,so its no biggy,,just like being real and honest always as to where I am in life and single or taken,,as I am Single
all the way around that field,,,lol

what can I say....? i think i need your words to be able to appreciate your words!

I simply just need YOUR SMILE HERE,,to FEEL MY APPRECIATIONS
from YOU!!!!!!!!!
Thank you..4him,,,wink

added to your poem



lets rejoin the laughter we had cherish in the time before
as we walk on the beach and see the sunset from afar
and watch the moon go down behind the mountains
the beauty of the colors look so sound.
as showing your happiness through your sense of humor
the warmth of your jokes. makes it all worth while
as the past is the past and today and tomorrow
is the future.
as the time stands still we laugh, cry untill no where else
to turn. as the stars we look and wish upon a brighter and new beganing
as runing through the waves and sands in our toes. shows that were still
children in some degree in our hearts.

whimsical ~ just made me smile!