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Topic: Promise
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 02/02/10 11:14 PM
Can I steal your night? Promising I'll keep you in sight. Can I steal away your day? Promising, with you I'll stay. Can I steal some of your affections? Promising to give you some relaxations. Can I steal some of your mind? Promising to give you some of mine. Can I steal a piece of your heart? Promising you, from me it will never part. Can I steal some of your life? Promising to take you as my wife.

Calleigh12 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 17193	Tue 02/02/10 11:20 PM
Awwww, that's lovely. You're really good.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 02/02/10 11:53 PM
Awwww, that's lovely. You're really good. Thanks calleigh,,I just try hard to make others feel,wink..and still show me a little,,my inner self..

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 02/04/10 04:57 PM
Gee,,I THOUGHT this was cool,,, but I DO think to much,,,,,

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Thu 02/04/10 07:31 PM
It is way cool T....

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 02/04/10 09:32 PM
like it

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Thu 02/04/10 09:42 PM
awesome, digging it brother

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Fri 02/05/10 05:08 AM


kdough Joined Sun 02/21/10 Posts: 86	Thu 02/25/10 02:48 AM
YOU ALREADY HAVE

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Thu 02/25/10 07:36 AM
Cool write brother, your poem, much soul and heart and wisdom in this poem

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