Topic: --- Dead to me ---
HawaiiMusikMan's photo
Sun 01/31/10 04:58 PM

I thought I saw you today
Had to look a few times and I'm still not sure
What gets me is that it effected me so much, even now
How dare you come here, of all places!
Why are you here?
Why didn't you leave me when we parted?

Unwillingly I've kept you with me
A ghost feeding the bitterness I thought I'd released
I truly do wish you well, just don't reappear
You're still dead to me

nvkikigirl's photo
Sun 01/31/10 05:06 PM
Edited by nvkikigirl on Sun 01/31/10 05:06 PM
good write!

a ghost feeding the bitterness....excellent!!

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Sun 01/31/10 05:08 PM
Dead in mind,body and sight,,,wink..
But never even one-more-night....flowerforyou NICE POEM..

HawaiiMusikMan's photo
Sun 01/31/10 05:35 PM

good write!

a ghost feeding the bitterness....excellent!!


Thanks flowerforyou

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Sun 01/31/10 05:47 PM
Nice...flowerforyou

HawaiiMusikMan's photo
Sun 01/31/10 07:49 PM

Nice...flowerforyou


flowerforyou