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Topic: THEY DONT COME BACK
ChangeofHeart Joined Sun 10/26/08 Posts: 1280	Mon 01/25/10 05:07 PM
my blood will not be celebrated it will continue to spill down the drain there will be no bread just a cold body dead dont worry you wont even know no tears for father son uncle or bro like a magic trick i will be gone silent no music no song

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 01/28/10 06:59 AM
sad but powerful

ChangeofHeart Joined Sun 10/26/08 Posts: 1280	Thu 01/28/10 12:37 PM
sad but powerful ty

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Thu 01/28/10 05:10 PM
I agree, very powerful, thank you

ChangeofHeart Joined Sun 10/26/08 Posts: 1280	Fri 01/29/10 12:05 AM
I agree, very powerful, thank you No Thank You

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 01/30/10 12:32 PM
good write.

Calleigh12 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 17193	Sat 01/30/10 12:34 PM
Great write.

vikrnle Joined Wed 01/27/10 Posts: 493	Sun 01/31/10 03:57 PM
Really deep.

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