Topic: Just Wondering...
starryeyeddolly's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:28 PM
what peoples tastes on poetry are on here? I write darker poetry but
really deep down its love poetry. Just wondering.

HangedMan's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:30 PM
Let's see some. I tend toward the darker side myself.

starryeyeddolly's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:31 PM
i posted some in the poetry section but thats mild stuff...i tend to umm
curse alot in my poetry..its angsty..but not teen angst..the good kind.

eileena9's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:31 PM
People on here tend to like all kinds of poetry...we all need to let out
our thoughts, bright or dark.

People will respond to whatever strikes their mood at the time.

flowerforyou flowerforyou

starryeyeddolly's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:32 PM
word.

HangedMan's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:32 PM
Have to take a peek at least.

starryeyeddolly's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:33 PM
fo' shizzle...lol im so ghetto

leslie89's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:33 PM
i write poetry on deep things like real situations
dis is a poem i wrote




Been haven diz feelin since I waz a younin.

Ma family wonder why i waz alwayz mean muggin.

But they aint know that deep inside my heart that they words tore it
peice by piece apart.

I dont like this feelin that i have inside.

sumtimes im mad, sad, hurt, it sucks so bad that want to cry.

My mom use to say that the devil is in me, but she know that the lords
there to defend me.

1million tears and 1 young child.

people sayin "I love you" but my heart is in denial.

Sometimes I feel more lonley then a ghost heart, the things I think I
dont even know where to start.

You may think this is just a poem but its not.

this is something i've been holdin inside but now its unlocked.

I know that my life is prolly 20times better then others, but I know how
it feels to have to act like my lil sisterz mother.

These words that im saying is strickly from the heart no one knew what i
was thinkin in the start.

A tough life aint got **** on me!

just because im diffrent dont judge me!

You dont know what i've been through you dont know what i've seen.

I hate you all.. and this much you can Believe.

Dont think that im Emo cuz dat much I am not.

Im just tryin to make it into my rightfull ****in spot.

Livein day by day, minute by minute. never know what tomorrow has or who
gonna be in it.

Im just a kid tryin to find the real me. But i guess 4 now il call
myself ....., Leslie

starryeyeddolly's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:35 PM
that is very beautiful in it's own way. i respect anyone who is brave
enough to post their work on the internet. its the one area of my life i
am confident in and my photo editing.

leslie89's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:37 PM
omg
thnx
i write songs & all there can be

starryeyeddolly's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:38 PM
i write songs and am a musician as well...just an all around artist...

oceanbreeze's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:40 PM
edward gorey is cool

HangedMan's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:41 PM
Not dark enough Starry. To cheery still. Although not bad.

starryeyeddolly's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:41 PM
you want dark ill find something..

HangedMan's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:43 PM
HEHE......The darker the better.

Chris90234's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:43 PM
I suppose most my material is od socio-political nature, generally
useing a lot of metaphors and requires the reader to interpret it

leslie89's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:45 PM
wat yall think of it?

no photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:47 PM
Hope

catchme_ifucan's photo
Sun 06/10/07 10:57 PM
devil Hi guys!

Leslie kewl poem,
Can I ask how old were you when you started feeling that way?
I'm asking because of my daughter..