Topic: the iron supper
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Thu 12/31/09 11:46 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 12/31/09 11:50 PM
i took a left
and went left
right checkered
black checked out
this is what it
will be
a phonograph
on a wood turntable
grooves grooves past a bluebird
escapes
an old ladies love
right pickled order
with the shine of vinegar
going forth and worth
same same same same
okay lets play and slap
spaghetti noodles against the bad the bad
boiling
a lobster escapes
i passed the tassel
to a horse he said he was mr ed
but he came out of
an hot dog bun


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Fri 01/01/10 12:06 AM
:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

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Fri 01/01/10 03:34 PM
Had to read it a couple times. Dig the images.
It started off quite seriously and I was definitely smiling by the last line.
Great write, jimz.