Topic: Not Knowing What We Do Not Know
AZKait's photo
Wed 12/30/09 07:40 PM
Knowing not
this lover's plot
A whisper trails
to no ear... avails
A glance unnoticed
briefs it's mark...quite focused
The moment of impasse
statuesque...frail as glass
Don't move...be still
Being hunted...is a thrill.

Feel my thoughts burning
into you yet?

That's me, undetected
Somewhere, psychically
inviting you
to dance
for me...












cherie091279's photo
Wed 12/30/09 07:41 PM
flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 12/30/09 08:16 PM
awesome insight or trust issues?? either way, hmmmmm...

kc0003's photo
Wed 12/30/09 09:55 PM
i enjoyed this piece, it's well crafted

i like the way you did not explain with too much detail. (it gives this piece more power)(and it's more provocative)

i have two suggestions if you would like to hear them...