Topic: food for thought
KalamazooGuy87's photo
Wed 12/30/09 12:00 AM
Allow me to expand on to greater depths
There is no limit, allow your mind no set-backs
Society will not stand in the way of my path
Common is not a word, a spirital binding
Allowing worldly influences to adapt to everyday life
I am not of this world, i stand with the world.
I seek a word, a word of christ, a word not yet given
one more day, preparations are in the making, not over night
Hear his voice, he understands.

Queene123's photo
Wed 12/30/09 12:14 AM

Allow me to expand on to greater depths
There is no limit, allow your mind no set-backs
Society will not stand in the way of my path
Common is not a word, a spirital binding
Allowing worldly influences to adapt to everyday life
I am not of this world, i stand with the world.
I seek a word, a word of christ, a word not yet given
one more day, preparations are in the making, not over night
Hear his voice, he understands.



added to your poem

he understands with more to give as his soul and love is what he cherishes towards everyone around, food for thought is not only a way to your path but your journey of a fresh new start as the word comes to mind of the spiritual awakening that we all share in mind, you count 1,2,3 as the world continues to grow

KalamazooGuy87's photo
Wed 12/30/09 12:18 AM
i like ur ending better =)