Topic: Short Story ( not finished yet )
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Tue 12/29/09 06:56 AM
When Angels Fall In Love

PART 1
The Curiosity

Her body was like the stem of a rose , without flaw nor dents and her lips drew me in with there velvet exterior with pink glaze of shimmering light hidden about them. I flew down from heavens and watched her from the distance , and soon enough my desire took the best of me…

With my presence unknown I held her tight , caressing her and holding her close , with my hands locked together , I drew my lips close to and whispered with a ominous presence….” do you believe in angels “ and within seconds….she turned. with one breath as she stared deep into my eyes with a smile that reached the heavens and replied with grace “ I do believe you’re an angel”, while she pursued with her lips and mine to follow , as we kissed passionately with lustful intent. I broke for a mere second to mutter down words , “ That I do believe, as your angel it is my job to make life itself shine , shine so bright that the stars themselves would become jealous “ and she replied with amity “ did it hurt when you fell from heaven? “ as she stared upwards , asking god “ if she could only for a second , be my angel for a while “.
Seconds later, I picked her up with great euphoria and replied with love, “ only for a second and then you healed my wounds and lit me up” and as I walked I let her know that god gave his blessing the moment our lips touched and sent us both to heaven. we passed through heavens gates , as her desire became stronger….with a spontaneous burst of emotion! She pushed me down , wings and all , and threw my halo aside. As she hovered above me , we pursued this cloud fantasy….

My hands rested along her side , as she stared down with that glorious smile. My eyes mirrored by her presence , pink cheeks gaining hills and a smile that was gaining depth and I said…” if revelations is the end , then I think it’s time we wrote our own chapter ” and within seconds she named it….An epilogue titled “ when angels fall in love “….

Part 2
The Attempt

There we laid , hovering above me as her intention grew wilder. My hands traveled along the frames of her wonderful body, mesmerized by her every curve and my lips traveled towards hers. I took a moment to cherish the seconds and said 4 words “ Once upon a time “. there, Twice she pressed upon my hips , thrice she hesitated , and four times we kissed and ever so passionately , my lips traveled from lips to neck , as my arms grew heavy and glided across her body of silk and tugged at the ends of what may been her top. Awaiting patiently for her resolve to take the next step and reveal a beauty , that hides underneath and I whispered out in a desiring mutter “ the sounds we shall make , will be an orchestra like no other and shall reach the heavens and angels shall dance to the music we make “.

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Mon 01/16/12 10:26 PM
quite the hypnotizing tale... it lends an aire of deja-vu...