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good or bad, tell me what you think. thanks! dont hold back, i can handle it
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It seems like a good profile, representative of you and your interests.
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thank you for checking it out
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thank you for checking it out ur welcome...GOOD LUCK |
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Bodybuilding way not my thing so this profile surprises me that I give it a high rateing. The text comes off as well spoken and carrys through a positive personality.
I think I would pick a different lead shot. Use it in your photo aray. Just put a good engageing photo that shows your face and upbeat personality. This pose looses in the small frame and comes off looking out of context. It also contridicts that bodybuilding is not your whole life. I am glad that you stress that you are a natural body builder. I have no problem with the sport if a person truely respects their body long term and keep the competion in perspective. I am sad that you would "promote" smoking cigars as a young person who seems to have so many blessings and others would want to emulate. I realize this is legal but after looseing a brother to lung cancer in his 40's (while my Dad remains vital at 82 because he has not smoked) I can not tell you the pain that comes to mind when I see a young person risking the kind of suffering that is so much more common in people who do smoke. I will pray you and those who love you are spared. |
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Thanks for the feedback. I already changed my main picture. Not saying its a good thing, but i only smoke 1-2 cigars a week. Could be better, could be worse.
I am sorry to hear about your brother. I have a very close family and have been fortunate to be around most of them most my life. My grandfather was a heavy cigarette smoker for quite a few years and he developed cancer as well. He was diagnosed with adno carcenoma this year the day after thanksgiving, and 19 days later passed away on the 16th of this month. It has been very hard on all of us the past few weeks. My sympathy is with you. thanks again for checking out my profile and for the comments. |
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I like this pic better too.
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Great job on the profile.. welcome to the site and happy seeking!
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