Topic: fifty souls
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Thu 12/24/09 04:20 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 12/24/09 04:26 PM
im walking down broadway
an island girl
on crack
takes me back

a heroin man
passes out in the can
in the bums ruse
i reach under to grab
the sack
yet the police
enter

way up
on broadway hill
the whores
still sell hell
for twenty
their skin stuck
to bone
even the fat ones
have skeleton faces

open up
the defeat
of the downtown gnome
i am the compulsive blob
fuucking and drugging
my fifty souls

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Thu 12/24/09 04:25 PM
No reply,you just..
Deal with?flowerforyou

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Thu 12/24/09 04:58 PM
This is good Jim...

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Thu 12/24/09 09:47 PM
This is great. I can't even really think of a comment but I really enjoyed it and I just thought the whole thing worked perfectly.