I just want an opinion of my profile. Thats all. And of course I humbly respect your opinion...

Much better.

I would take out the last two sentences, and maybe add a couple more pics...otherwise it's ok, these things are usually a work in progress anyway so to speak.

In your defense...I don't think you meant to deliberately piss anyone off with the other post, although it was rude and disrespectful, however, just be careful how you word things in the future. It's not so much the content of the words themselves but sometimes the delivery. To some it might seem a joke, some flippant/sarcastic, some will be offended, and some might just dismiss it altogether, but without the benefit of looking in a persons eyes or hear the inflection in their voice, things can be severely misunderstood in type.

P.S. I don't know if Queene is still loading her gun, lol, but the apology for offense is appreciated.

Hello and welcome, by the way.

Looks good but I would remove the "not sure why you are here" and "don't really think I'll meet anyone here" part. It sounds a bit negative. Describe more about you and what you are looking for

good luck