Topic: the goodbye kiss (revised & revisited)
bedlum1's photo
Thu 12/17/09 07:31 PM
standing alone in the pouring rain,
with nothing for shelter except my pain,
the icy water chills my bones,
and lets me know i'm all alone,
a foggy haze of fear and grief,
come to offer no relief,
my sarrows lead me to the brink,
and finally my spirit sinks,
my broken heart has turned to mush,
and misery gives the final push,
as i fall into the dark abyss,
in defiance i blow a goodbye kiss...

4everw8n's photo
Thu 12/17/09 07:40 PM
Well said. I've been there. I felt your poem.

bedlum1's photo
Thu 12/17/09 07:44 PM

Well said. I've been there. I felt your poem.
being able to draw on past experiences helps creativity..just dont dwell on them...lol