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Love is just a word we say,
So rarely is it true. Sometimes we all forget to give, Our love where love is due. How is it someone truely knows, When love is in thier heart? Confusing though it seems to be, Affection's just the start. The rest will come when given time, No one should have to try. You'll know when it feels right to you, When tears of joy you cry. |
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Love is just a word we say, So rarely is it true. Sometimes we all forget to give, Our love where love is due. How is it someone truely knows, When love is in thier heart? Confusing though it seems to be, Affection's just the start. The rest will come when given time, No one should have to try. You'll know when it feels right to you, When tears of joy you cry.  wow that was truly beautiful, it touched me some. i really love it
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Love is just a word we say, So rarely is it true. Sometimes we all forget to give, Our love where love is due. How is it someone truely knows, When love is in thier heart? Confusing though it seems to be, Affection's just the start. The rest will come when given time, No one should have to try. You'll know when it feels right to you, When tears of joy you cry. 
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I really liked every part
except the last two lines. Just being brutally honest. |
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for the most part i enjoyed this piece
i do agree with P_P i would have liked to see the end really hit a home run. i know it is hard sometimes with shorter work and i am certainly not immune to it my self but, it is all about growth...right? |
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