Topic: What Do You See
writer_gurl's photo
Wed 11/18/09 12:03 PM
What do you see
when you turn your eyes
What do you see
When you see me

I have lost my soul
Have you seen it
My skin is so cold
How can I warm it

Laughing eyes
gentle smile
lover of life
That was me for awhile

Childish ways
So innocent
memories stay
of sorrow and merriment

Where is my soul
Have you seen it
Here it is so old
Many emotions have persued it

What do you see
When you see beauty
What do you see
when you see me

jimz's photo
Wed 11/18/09 03:31 PM

What do you see
when you turn your eyes
What do you see
When you see me

I have lost my soul
Have you seen it
My skin is so cold
How can I warm it

Laughing eyes
gentle smile
lover of life
That was me for awhile

Childish ways
So innocent
memories stay
of sorrow and merriment

Where is my soul
Have you seen it
Here it is so old
Many emotions have persued it

What do you see
When you see beauty
What do you see
when you see me


great poem:heart:

no photo
Wed 11/18/09 04:30 PM
:heart: I see you, in all your splendor.
In words so thought through, coming from your own self doubts, self evaluations, and inner expectations that reflect who you are.

flowerforyou THIS, was a very nice write to read, from my long day of work,,thank you..

cherie091279's photo
Wed 11/18/09 04:56 PM
Very nice...flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Wed 11/18/09 05:01 PM
flowerforyou very nice!