Topic: Just STOP it
d4tc's photo
Thu 11/05/09 06:30 PM

You look amazing --

even in those sweats

worn out hole ripped
paint drip dried sweats

with that ratted hair
I see the beauty where

it is supposed to be;

that smile you are hiding
so well with those wrinkles
on your head etching the words,

"I will never look like
I did when I was half my age"

shouldnt be dwelled upon.

I know you are gorgeous

and you think otherwise

although you love hearing it

you don't believe it

Just

STOP

it

You are more beautiful than
you will ever think you are

and those wrinkles you
are forcing is doubt
for lack of happiness
based on something you
don't feel anymore
is ridiculously
unnecessary

Just

STOP

it

You are
as you look

Amazing

in my opinion;

no one elses opinion matters
anymore now so

Just

STOP

it


MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 11/05/09 07:56 PM


You look amazing --

even in those sweats

worn out hole ripped
paint drip dried sweats

with that ratted hair
I see the beauty where

it is supposed to be;

that smile you are hiding
so well with those wrinkles
on your head etching the words,

"I will never look like
I did when I was half my age"

shouldnt be dwelled upon.

I know you are gorgeous

and you think otherwise

although you love hearing it

you don't believe it

Just

STOP

it

You are more beautiful than
you will ever think you are

and those wrinkles you
are forcing is doubt
for lack of happiness
based on something you
don't feel anymore
is ridiculously
unnecessary

Just

STOP

it

You are
as you look

Amazing

in my opinion;

no one elses opinion matters
anymore now so

Just

STOP

it


:thumbsup:

no photo
Fri 11/06/09 06:50 AM
very nice J-you have painted a woman's insecurity so well

Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 11/06/09 06:54 AM
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

no photo
Fri 11/06/09 11:15 AM
so very nice,.enjoyable read
hmm..such heart felt truth.