Topic: myth
jimz's photo
Tue 10/27/09 03:08 PM
if the sun
alleges
the moon
was right
what then
of mythology
and when neptune
again beats
my father will i
again wake up
and wonder

and then i see
i see an intellect ant
i see eighty times
the intellect drained

and when what the wind is
and what the wind is not
will the soot in the nunnery
allege the black black bird
killed the imagination

and i
i am not myself
i am made of bricks
and the cement
that holds me
holds me only
in the void

wannacuddlewthme's photo
Tue 10/27/09 03:11 PM
Good one drinker

jimz's photo
Tue 10/27/09 03:12 PM
thank you drinker

EkkoLost's photo
Tue 10/27/09 03:12 PM
I like it,but it may be beyond me,i carnt grasp the meaning! help!

no photo
Tue 10/27/09 03:34 PM
Deep and empty of the vast plains of logic, comes the virture of free thoughts. Nicely written jim...drinker

MzEm's photo
Tue 10/27/09 05:21 PM
flowers