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Topic: ~afternoon date
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 10/19/09 02:57 PM
we meet in the back yard me in my hoody and gloves hair pulled up a determined look in my eyes this is the day I grab hold of you you offer little resistance I appreciate that sun shines upon us tendrils of hair escape my ponytail a fine sheen on my face body warms I use you until I can't use you any more then I blow you a kiss til our next leaf date

Itguy70 Joined Tue 10/06/09 Posts: 24	Mon 10/19/09 03:09 PM
and your point is???

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 10/19/09 03:29 PM
itguy70....I wrote in on a spur-of-the-moment thing...so no 'point'....stands as is. teasingbrunette.

HockeyChick Joined Thu 10/23/08 Posts: 4194	Mon 10/19/09 03:55 PM
and your point is??? that's what i like most about her poems....there generally isn't one... it's up to us to use our imagination

Moviemadness Joined Thu 02/12/09 Posts: 180	Mon 10/19/09 05:16 PM
your default picture kinda goes with this :), and sometimes no point is a good point ;). I like it. By the way hockeychick BOONDOCK SAINTS ROCKS!!! :D

Sandcrab Joined Fri 10/24/08 Posts: 1392	Mon 10/19/09 06:58 PM
and your point is??? Idiot. It is poetry, think about what she is saying. She is by far the most interesting and creative poet on Mingle and she should get her writings published.

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