we meet

in the back yard

me in my hoody and gloves

hair pulled up

a determined

look in my eyes

this is the day

I grab hold of you

you offer little resistance

I appreciate that

sun shines upon us

tendrils of hair escape my ponytail

a fine sheen on my face

body warms

I use you until I can't use you any more

then I blow you a kiss

til our next

leaf date

and your point is???

itguy70....I wrote in on a spur-of-the-moment thing...so no 'point'....stands as is. teasingbrunette.

that's what i like most about her poems....there generally isn't one...
it's up to us to use our imagination

your default picture kinda goes with this :), and sometimes no point is a good point ;). I like it. By the way hockeychick BOONDOCK SAINTS ROCKS!!! :D

Idiot. It is poetry, think about what she is saying.
She is by far the most interesting and creative poet on Mingle and she should get her writings published.