Topic: When I close my eyes
somethingspecial33's photo
Wed 10/14/09 06:20 PM
Every night I see you
when I close my eyes to sleep.
Allowing my mind to take me
to a world where our hearts could meet.
Its there your beauty stuns me
making my heart skip a beat.
As I stare deeply into your lovely eyes
wanton lust grows inside.
Pulling you close so I can hold you tight.
Everything in this world seems so right.
With tender kisses on your neck so bare.
I may never want to leave from here.
Wrapped with passion our hearts embrace
only to awake filled with hate!
For as the sun rises to fade away my dream
awaking me to the reality.
That I am here and you there
so many obstacles we must bear
to have our hearts unite in love.
So as the sun fades and the moon rises high
I will meet you there
When I close my eyes.flowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Wed 10/14/09 06:27 PM
::heart:

greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 10/14/09 06:42 PM
Very good writing...

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 10/14/09 06:51 PM

Every night I see you
when I close my eyes to sleep.
Allowing my mind to take me
to a world where our hearts could meet.
Its there your beauty stuns me
making my heart skip a beat.
As I stare deeply into your lovely eyes
wanton lust grows inside.
Pulling you close so I can hold you tight.
Everything in this world seems so right.
With tender kisses on your neck so bare.
I may never want to leave from here.
Wrapped with passion our hearts embrace
only to awake filled with hate!
For as the sun rises to fade away my dream
awaking me to the reality.
That I am here and you there
so many obstacles we must bear
to have our hearts unite in love.
So as the sun fades and the moon rises high
I will meet you there
When I close my eyes.flowerforyou
:thumbsup:

bedlum1's photo
Wed 10/14/09 06:59 PM
smokin very nice