Topic: "Away From You"
BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 04:01 AM
An abstract concept
A profound devotion
The diversity in the answers
The complexity of the meanings
A difficult passion
One that bares no explanation
Unsurmountable questions
Answers that leave you wanting
Using one word to encapsulate
Defined or refinsed
Trust me, it means so much more
Then what he proclaims it to be
Envision the silence
Growing numb in the loneliness
A void is filled with reason
Though far-stretched as it may seem to be
Not only is a dream born
But an undefined resolve
This, this is my purpose
While differences are conceptualized
Proving it has no universal definition
Love is still spelled the same way
Yet so is hatred
Memories of futility
The regrets are in bold print
Ever so lost in the remembrance
Attempts to calculate what went so wrong
On the outside
I still peer inward
Isn't that supposed to be my life?
Traveling so long for a promised place
Only to arrive and find nothing
Empty, abandoned, desolate
So many words to describe one thing
A thing that should never have to be defined
I used to sit by idly
Watching the world move
Waiting forever for a sign
Immune to the destruction about me
No longer will I follow you
Down these roads of repeativeness
All you lead me into is sorrow
I must find a new path
One that leads me away from you...

kc0003's photo
Sun 10/11/09 04:06 AM
good emotion...
good ending...

well done

drinker

BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 04:15 AM
How in the sweet name of Mary..
Did you read and reply so frikkin fast?!
I just posted it! lol

Thanx tho, none-the-less..
..and hey..
I was doing some backtrailing, cuz yeah I'm new and all..
..but I know your not and I was interested in reading some more of yours..

Well, that one string had a bunch in it..
I really admire/respect/and like your work.

I was going to respond but it was like 980 pages long..
..and I'm getting tired; finally..

One day, maybe I'll get to catch up on the ones you have around here.
I hope to see more of your own in the near future..

greeneyedlady42's photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:30 AM
Now THAT is remarkable writing!

Very well expressed --so many things Im sure everyone has felt.

Welcome- its good to have you here..

no photo
Sun 10/11/09 06:08 AM
Nice writeflowerforyou

BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 04:22 PM

Now THAT is remarkable writing!

Very well expressed --so many things Im sure everyone has felt.

Welcome- its good to have you here..


Thanx it's good to feel welcomed, anywhere, let alone here. :]


Hey Kim, thanx for the 2nd rose. :]
I'm now aiming to get a dozen from you. XD