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hey there relatively new here and looking for constructive criticism
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Edited by
lilith401
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Fri 10/09/09 10:07 AM
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The physical description is redundant; that is covered in the dropdown stuff. Talk more about YOU, your personality and outlook on life.
And have a friend take some photos where the ladies can actually see you! Welcome to the site, have a great time. |
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welcome
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welcome and good luck
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I agree with Lilith. Take out the physical description. Also, write more about yourself and what you're looking for.
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The physical description is redundant; that is covered in the dropdown stuff. Talk more about YOU, your personality and outlook on life. And have a friend take some photos where the ladies can actually see you! Welcome to the site, have a great time. thanx i updated the text pics to come monday should be able to get some good canadian thanksgiving pics. hope the text is better |
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The physical description is redundant; that is covered in the dropdown stuff. Talk more about YOU, your personality and outlook on life. And have a friend take some photos where the ladies can actually see you! Welcome to the site, have a great time. Sage advice...good luck! In a quiet moment, really think about what you want...and write it in your profile! |
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