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Whisper a trident…fly, fly, fly…on the breath of the wind…barely there…
This flooded instant…I could dance and twirl and glow and smile eyes a-twinkle. A single crumb of that could feed me, a glimmer of it could sustain me… ‘till next time…when I just can’t resurrect my dead-beaten body again…to face this world alone. To be found nowhere hiding behind a magnificent tree… Gentility…caress my heart and bind it in strength… Allow me this tangibility…to feather-trace my face…revealing a softness in it’s place… Remind me over and again…while tossing random thoughts on a pillow of clouds…against your steady weight… How you will be there…how you will keep here…and always breathe me into you… |
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I adore this very much!
You are good! |
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You're so sweet Kelli...I see we're up at the same time...and I read yours too. I like that it's a bit wild...feels very right...I will post there too!
Thank you! |
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like this one...
you should post more work |
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Many thanks dc and cy...always gracious with your comments...
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Excellant.
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Lovely!
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Whisper a trident…fly, fly, fly…on the breath of the wind…barely there… This flooded instant…I could dance and twirl and glow and smile eyes a-twinkle. A single crumb of that could feed me, a glimmer of it could sustain me… ‘till next time…when I just can’t resurrect my dead-beaten body again…to face this world alone. To be found nowhere hiding behind a magnificent tree… Gentility…caress my heart and bind it in strength… Allow me this tangibility…to feather-trace my face…revealing a softness in it’s place… Remind me over and again…while tossing random thoughts on a pillow of clouds…against your steady weight… How you will be there…how you will keep here…and always breathe me into you… |
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I love they tones of this, very well done.
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I love they tones of this, very well done. |
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:)
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Just Dance !
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