Do I sound like a baby at the bottom of my profile? Rate and criticism me all you want.

Hi

I think your profile is really good!

I don't think you sound like a baby in your last sentence but I would reword it.

It seems you are almost apologizing for having a disability. You shouldn't feel that way. I would say something like this:

P.S. I have epilepsy and it effects me (sometimes, rarely, etc). I manage it so my life is not interrupted.

I sort of put words in your mouth because I don't know the seriousness of your disability. I am hoping you can write something that does apply to you without losing confidence in yourself.

Enjoy Mingle!

Thank you, Melodygirl. Take care.

no you dont sound like a baby at least your open as some people may not be
i also have a health issue and mine is on my profile

You might say something like: “There are only two ways to approach life—as victim or gallant fighter—and I decided to act rather than react, deal with what life dealt me rather than play with a stacked deck. Because if I didn’t take control and play life, it would play me. My epilepsy is treatable...it is nothing to fear...and I have a lot to offer the right woman. That's something that will be clearly evident to her when we start a dialogue. I am ready!"

Good luck, my friend...You will do fine!