what do you think about my profile??

There's nothing there....

dude, you have NO interests?

You have to fill in the profile to ask for advice.....I'll cut you some slack since you are from my hometown, though!

Well it sure didn't take too much of my time to read it! Gotta write something if you want our opinion.

We can't offer feedback for something that isn't there: no essay and no interests.

Create a profile and I'm sure the wonderful world of Mingle will offer productive opinions!

Welcome

ok,thanks...how about now????

That is a good start!

Clean up your grammar and punctuation a little (it really does matter).

I would remove the last couple of references to drama and delete the statement after, "I think im a decent man..."

For example:

>>> Though others might disagree.... <<<

Saying others would disagree whether you are a good man or not is somewhat negative. Why would you care what others think of you -- especially when your esteem is as high as you state.

I actually would use a different superlative than "decent". Decent implies middle of the road to barely acceptable. If you are more than that, say it! "I am honorable, loyal, a man of ethics" , etc (use your own words). Think about it -- when we see something that is 'not so great' like a bad movie or a rundown car -- what do we say? "Meh, it's ok ... just decent." No one wants to be "decent" or vanilla.

>>> I dont want to be involved in drama,even though I end up there quite abit...(self inflicted im sure)im opinionative,anyway,if you want to know anymore just ask.... <<<

The most tired statements on profiles are "no drama" and "just ask". Most people involved in drama know enough about it to make that statement -- red flag! As far as "just ask" -- why? This is YOUR profile. This is how you market yourself. Write something to inspire a conversation from a lady that shows interest in you. "Just ask" is a red flag for -- I’m too lazy to write anything of substance.

Thanks for reading my suggestions. Many on here think I am 'harsh' but if someone wants feedback then that is what I offer.

To me, saying "great" or "welcome" is not really helping when a member specifically wants help with their profile.

If a profile is a hot mess -- "great" doesn't help!

You have a great and kind vibe. I think you will do well!

Awesome

dreamy

What do you like to do on dates?

lol...i havent been on a date since i was 22....i wouldnt have a clue what to do anymore....

Well...where do you think you would like to take a date?

Hello everyone...I am the father of 3 beautiful children that I love very much....I am recently divorced after 17 years of marriage.Right now I am trying to figure out who I am & where I belong in this world...I believe in jesus christ.I was a us marine..Im a good man with a good heart.if you think you might be interested,I look foward to hearing from you.

ahh better

that actually says a lot

THAT is beautiful Quiet!

One major change though .... US -- as in United States of America -- should be capitalized!!!

He was a marine and proper use is mandantory!

I like:

Hello everyone. I am the father of three beautiful children that I love very much. I am recently divorced after 17 years of marriage. Right now I am trying to figure out who I am and where I belong in this world. I believe in Jesus Christ. I was a U.S. Marine. I'm a good man with a good heart.

If you think that you might be interested, I look forward to hearing from you.

Now....what kinds of things would he like to do on a date?

Best wishes and Good luck to you!

Looks good.

Good luck.

Welcome


Tammy

I want to thank everyone for there help,especially melodygirl.I really appreciated all your input.thanks,Jim