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Topic: Invisible
writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Thu 09/24/09 02:17 PM
He is with me every single day He always talks to me Makes me happy in every way He is handsome his smile is enigmatic His appearance was winsome and his eyes twinkle like magic He is a comfort He was my rock Hours of building a secret fort and late nights of endless talk I never knew what he did or where he was from What he was like a kid Or even if he was one Through out the years He stayed young He always stayed near when I had no one People started to whisper she is just a kid But my friend was always happy, a good listener Until I realized he didn't exist, he never did

chickayoshi Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 8621	Thu 09/24/09 02:20 PM
I don't know whether to or . I like this poem.

msdestinbooty Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 1915	Thu 09/24/09 02:32 PM


Jesusofrome Joined Fri 09/18/09 Posts: 68	Thu 09/24/09 02:52 PM
that was really good ^_^

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 09/24/09 03:41 PM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Fri 09/25/09 09:17 AM
oo-writer, nicely done! You hear about people staying in touch with their inner child, hmmmm............this provokes curiosity hmmmm, I wonder if someone was extremely sensitive if they could tap into the inner child of another? hmmmmmm

Ladylid2012 Joined Sun 07/05/09 Posts: 42269	Fri 09/25/09 09:36 AM


MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 09/25/09 09:52 AM
He is with me every single day He always talks to me Makes me happy in every way He is handsome his smile is enigmatic His appearance was winsome and his eyes twinkle like magic He is a comfort He was my rock Hours of building a secret fort and late nights of endless talk I never knew what he did or where he was from What he was like a kid Or even if he was one Through out the years He stayed young He always stayed near when I had no one People started to whisper she is just a kid But my friend was always happy, a good listener Until I realized he didn't exist, he never did Another great one from writer_gurl

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Fri 09/25/09 01:46 PM
Invisible friends. I remember those days. It was so much easier to entertain myself when I had those friends that listened. Great Write

writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Fri 09/25/09 02:09 PM
Invisible friends. I remember those days. It was so much easier to entertain myself when I had those friends that listened. Great Write Thanx, but the girl in this didn't think he was invisible until people told her he was

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