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Topic: Give it a once over
shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 06:54 AM
if you don't mind.

Riding_Dubz's photo
Thu 09/17/09 06:57 AM
crop that main pic ! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


other then that looks great :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

(((shoes)))

Jtevans's photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:04 AM
Daddy like love drool smokin

shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:18 AM

crop that main pic ! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


other then that looks great :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

(((shoes)))
Thanks Dubz but, it's as far as it goes.

no photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:22 AM
are you asking us to rate your pictures or the body of your profile message?

Riding_Dubz's photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:25 AM
no it's not here you go happy


shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:25 AM

are you asking us to rate your pictures or the body of your profile message?
The entirety of if it if you don't mind.

shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:27 AM

no it's not here you go happy


Thank's Babe!

no photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:32 AM


are you asking us to rate your pictures or the body of your profile message?
The entirety of if it if you don't mind.



well if you are curious, your "profile" needs some work

You start off by saying, I'm looking for nothing but honesty.

However you go on to then start saying a bunch of other things that have nothing to do with honesty. Like:

And, if the possibility of something becoming real? That I would be hopeful for. I have to say gentlemen, you must have a car respectable enough to take me on a date with.........for starter's. Yes, this has been an (I hate this word) issue.
I have my own and, it's far from crappy.


That whole paragraph was about you, not the man. And it has nothing to do with a man being honest. It seems to me that it has more to do with you trying to be honest with us.

If you only are interested in men with nice cars. Just say that. No need to beat around the bush.

Then you go on to say

I love wonderful food and yes, I'm very down to Earth.

You are telling us you are down to Earth, however you just told us you want us to be honest in one sentence and it took you a paragraph for you to tell us that you only want a guy with a nice car?

Hmmmm



I much prefer to cook at home as opposed to going out for dining. Although, there are time's that dining out is nice. An evening in with my sweetheart, a fabulous meal, a great bottle of vino. Who could ask for more? Maybe a movie too. And, some popcorn later. I like to shoot pool.



That's all fine, but for me it doesn't even matter because of what was said before it.


Go for long drive's to no where on the spur of the moment,
the drive-in's. Used to love spelunking and hiking,in Az.


The second I read that. I asked myself, "I wonder if she went spelunking and hiking in a nice car?"


Interested yet? One last thing, I'm NOT LOOKING FOR A HOOK UP!


What!?
What is a hook up?
And no, I'm not interested and that is unfortunate because if I was like a typical guy and only looked at pictures I would be

shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:42 AM



are you asking us to rate your pictures or the body of your profile message?
The entirety of if it if you don't mind.



well if you are curious, your "profile" needs some work

You start off by saying, I'm looking for nothing but honesty.

However you go on to then start saying a bunch of other things that have nothing to do with honesty. Like:

And, if the possibility of something becoming real? That I would be hopeful for. I have to say gentlemen, you must have a car respectable enough to take me on a date with.........for starter's. Yes, this has been an (I hate this word) issue.
I have my own and, it's far from crappy.


That whole paragraph was about you, not the man. And it has nothing to do with a man being honest. It seems to me that it has more to do with you trying to be honest with us.

If you only are interested in men with nice cars. Just say that. No need to beat around the bush.

Then you go on to say

I love wonderful food and yes, I'm very down to Earth.

You are telling us you are down to Earth, however you just told us you want us to be honest in one sentence and it took you a paragraph for you to tell us that you only want a guy with a nice car?

Hmmmm



I much prefer to cook at home as opposed to going out for dining. Although, there are time's that dining out is nice. An evening in with my sweetheart, a fabulous meal, a great bottle of vino. Who could ask for more? Maybe a movie too. And, some popcorn later. I like to shoot pool.



That's all fine, but for me it doesn't even matter because of what was said before it.


Go for long drive's to no where on the spur of the moment,
the drive-in's. Used to love spelunking and hiking,in Az.


The second I read that. I asked myself, "I wonder if she went spelunking and hiking in a nice car?"


Interested yet? One last thing, I'm NOT LOOKING FOR A HOOK UP!


What!?
What is a hook up?
And no, I'm not interested and that is unfortunate because if I was like a typical guy and only looked at pictures I would be
OK so, look's like I should just start over. My issue with car's is that, the last 5 guy's I dated either didn't have one or, it was a piece of crap. They were too embarrassed to take me out in it. BTW, I hate Vette's. Just so you know, he doesn't have to have an expensive import.

no photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:47 AM
Don't scare away the good guys, thats all I'm saying

shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:51 AM

Don't scare away the good guys, that's all I'm saying
I hear ya. Maybe I'm just too on the defensive, saying what I don't want you know. C'mon, you know what a hook-up is........don't you? I'm tired of that immaturity. I most certainly do not want to scare the god men. So, any constuctive critisism is very welcomed.flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 09/17/09 07:59 AM
yeah well if you're not looking for a hook up, saying..."No hook ups" isn't the way to do it.


Cuz guess what? You're still gonna get emails from guys that say..."Hey wanna come over and snuggle?"


Not ever getting around that.


But by you putting that at the end of your profile it just makes you seem...ummm...edgy?

Is that a good way to put it?

shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 08:06 AM

yeah well if you're not looking for a hook up, saying..."No hook ups" isn't the way to do it.


Cuz guess what? You're still gonna get emails from guys that say..."Hey wanna come over and snuggle?"


Not ever getting around that.


But by you putting that at the end of your profile it just makes you seem...ummm...edgy?

Is that a good way to put it?
Ok, I get your point. I'm just tired of it is all.

LewisW123's photo
Thu 09/17/09 08:11 AM
Edited by LewisW123 on Thu 09/17/09 08:12 AM
I don't like being critical, but since you asked:

You come across a little materialistic. Take out the thing about the car. If you don't like his car, don't go out with him more than once.

AND, you might as well put: MUST HAVE A BOAT.

Or take out the stuff about boating and replace it with something a tad more subtle, such as: Love the beach, the lake, jet-skiing, boating - if you have a boat or jet skis, that would be a definite plus!

Other than that, you are very attractive and you sound like a nice person. I can't imagine you would have problems meeting a lot of men and weeding out the losers.

LewisW123's photo
Thu 09/17/09 08:11 AM
Edited by LewisW123 on Thu 09/17/09 08:15 AM
BTW, I was just trying to give you a little constructive criticism about your profile, nothing personal. I'm sure you are a fantastic person. Sometimes it's hard to get across to other people in a profile just how awesome we really are.:wink:

no photo
Thu 09/17/09 08:12 AM


I understand.

But, being tired of it is one thing. Giving up is another ;)



You'll find somebody...I've redone my profile probably fifteen times. And the ladies still don't jive well with what I am looking for.

So my advice is this. When it comes to writing your profile. Less is more and more is less.


Unless you are totally sure of what you want to say, do not say it.

And just ask us when we email youflowerforyou

no photo
Thu 09/17/09 08:14 AM

I don't like being critical, but since you asked:

You come across a little materialistic. Take out the thing about the car. If you don't like his car, don't go out with him more than once.

AND, you might as well put: MUST HAVE A BOAT.

Or take out the stuff about boating and replace it with something a tad more subtle, such as: Love the beach, the lake, jet-skiing, boating - if you have a boat or jet skis, that would be a definite plus!

Other than that, you are very attractive and you sound like a nice person. I can't imagine you would have problems meeting a lot of men and weeding out the losers.


see shoemonkey?

look at lewis there.......

*im shaking my head*

ya keep scaring away the decent guys all you will have is losers...

like dubz and jt evans laugh laugh KIDDING! love you guys!bigsmile

shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 08:16 AM

I don't like being critical, but since you asked:

You come across a little materialistic. Take out the thing about the car. If you don't like his car, don't go out with him more than once.

AND, you might as well put: MUST HAVE A BOAT.

Or take out the stuff about boating and replace it with something a tad more subtle, such as: Love the beach, the lake, jet-skiing, boating - if you have a boat or jet skis, that would be a definite plus!

Other than that, you are very attractive and you sound like a nice person. I can't imagine you would have problems meeting a lot of men and weeding out the losers.
I don't mean to come off as materialistic, truly. I love boat's and car's. What can I say? It doesn't mean you have to have a boat. I do have an appreciation for he old woody's like, Chris Craft is what I'm trying to get across. And, sail boat's as well. Doesn't mean you have to own one. As far as the car thing goes, too many men haven't even had one.

shoesmonkey's photo
Thu 09/17/09 08:17 AM


I don't like being critical, but since you asked:

You come across a little materialistic. Take out the thing about the car. If you don't like his car, don't go out with him more than once.

AND, you might as well put: MUST HAVE A BOAT.

Or take out the stuff about boating and replace it with something a tad more subtle, such as: Love the beach, the lake, jet-skiing, boating - if you have a boat or jet skis, that would be a definite plus!

Other than that, you are very attractive and you sound like a nice person. I can't imagine you would have problems meeting a lot of men and weeding out the losers.


see shoemonkey?

look at lewis there.......

*im shaking my head*

ya keep scaring away the decent guys all you will have is losers...

like dubz and jt evans laugh laugh KIDDING! love you guys!bigsmile
I'll revamp, I promise.

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