darkness surrounds me with the demons mist,
i look around it's the light i miss,
it takes my soul and flies away,
my empty shell is left to sway,
flapping in a caustic breeze,
what's left of me begins to freeze,
my body cracks and falls apart,
leaving just my broken heart,
bleeding out upon the ground,
it beats once more it's final sound,
and as i drift into nothingness,
i realize there's just one thing i miss,
the feel, the touch of your lips,
and i long for just one final kiss

great write hun

AMAZING!!!!!!

thank you

I'm feeling that right now brother!!!! I think you just said everything i been trying to say this week....

got to let it flow

xox

I wish it was that easy but somereason right now just can't right

put a bunch of one liners together then see what you have

darkness inspires as well as the light

out of the ashes of sorrow and heartbreak we rise again like the phoenix, stronger and wiser

so very true... great write