Topic: Fantasy Lives | |
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Edited by
nvkikigirl
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Tue 09/08/09 10:52 AM
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A mixture of fantasy, reality, hope, and fun...
Kimberly Ann 09/08/09 A shot in the dark is what we were As friends and families snickered But our hearts wouldn’t allow us To abide by someone else’s rules I am usually one for hiding But not when it comes to you I have that lovesick notion To step up and yell your name Scream it with the sweetest hint Of love and admiration Defend you to the world As you continue to steal my heart I desire everyone to know the joy I feel When I have you by my side Whispering in my ear and holding me close Promising to never let me go Loving me as only a man like you can Embracing my uniqueness and every inch Seeing the woman I now see in the mirror Because of your affections You have changed me, and made me a believer in fairy tales. I am the Princess and you are my Charming. |
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Very sweet! Great ending
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Edited by
nvkikigirl
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Tue 09/08/09 11:12 AM
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Thank you both very much! I admire the writers on this site and appreciate you taking time to read mine as I travel the path of poetry...
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Lovely, just lovely....
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Very Lovely...
Fairy tales can come true, It can happen to you... *Disney* |
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Thank you so much MzEm and MsTeddy, I am so glad you both stopped by. You all brought such a nice smile to my face!!!
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nicely done
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Edited by
nvkikigirl
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Tue 09/08/09 11:39 PM
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thank you so much!!! have a great evening! you all are the sweetest!
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Ahh, that's what a heart lives fantasy, reality, hope, and fun. Very nicely written.
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Thank you greatly! Minglers are so wonderful!!
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Really liked that!!
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Thank you so much! You all are very cool!! Happy Day!!!
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