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how is my profile now
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idk seems kinda thin on the description but not bad
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Edited by
markc48
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Sun 09/06/09 07:37 PM
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spelling errors look at your title
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Run your profile through grammar and spelling! That is hard to read and most girls will pass on poorly written profiles. Everyone has access to spelling and grammar tools; use them!
Your title also has two HUGE errors: "look for my better have" I think you mean, "LOOKING for my better HALF" 
Add more to your profile but make sure you check your writing for errors! 
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Edited by
Quietman_2009
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Sun 09/06/09 07:56 PM
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how is my profile now ummmmmm you didnt really change anything did you but I still give you +3 for being a Texan |
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even though some people may look at errors
but no one is perfect. so with me i tend to write backwards but i will correct my spelling if i dont see it right off the bat.. i had a old bf that used to critize my spelling and yea he would piss me off. he knew it to, but did it any how |
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Short, but decent!! Will you be posting more photos?
And it's "...better half" Best wishes! 
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I didn't see as many spelling errors. Looks better, could use more pictures.
You sound like a nice guy, so good luck with THAT (you'll understand if you read the forums for a few days). |
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