Topic: Who are you?
vivian2981's photo
Fri 09/04/09 12:00 PM
Who are you…
To judge me?
Have you
Walked my path or
Shared my life?

Why should you judge me?
You know not who I am
What I've seen.
Where I've been.

Who are you to criticize?
Did you hold me
When I cried?
Where you there
When love died?

Who are you to sneer?
Why does my actions
Bother you , dear?
Had you rather laugh
Or shed a tear?
Let the world hear you whine
Or leave a smile behind?

Who are you
That's better than I?
Are you so special
You can't see my eyes?

They hold hurt and pain
If you look deep into them.
But this is not
for the world to see.

As I tease and flirt
Who do I hurt?
Is your mind so small
You don't wonder at all?
Why I do the things I do?
You guard your sensibility
With judgment harsh
"Oh my, I would never to that!"
You say. " This person is not fit
For polite society!"

Did someone die
And make You God?
That YOU can pass judgment
On ME!




MzEm's photo
Fri 09/04/09 12:02 PM
drinker Good one....

no photo
Fri 09/04/09 12:03 PM
drinker drinker drinker

vivian2981's photo
Fri 09/04/09 12:04 PM

drinker Good one....


Thanks!drinker

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 09/04/09 12:08 PM
Yeah, what she said, just back that truck up a bit and look a little deeper before you bounce on that trampoline of conclusions. Nicely done!

vivian2981's photo
Fri 09/04/09 12:11 PM

Yeah, what she said, just back that truck up a bit and look a little deeper before you bounce on that trampoline of conclusions. Nicely done!


Thanks! Appreciate it!