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Edited by
WolfEyez
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Wed 09/02/09 07:28 PM
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She's a loner by nature and a runaway at heart.
She's disastrous by force, right from the start. She gave it her best while ditching temptation. And those years of trying never gave any elation. Now that she's had some years to rest, it's time to keep running. Run, runaway and never look back. Forget about the motivation you have always lacked. Nothing else matters expect the path you run. Run. Run until the pain is undone. Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow. Disregard today and focus on the sorrow. Run, runaway and never look back. Forget about the motivation you have always lacked. Nothing else matters expect the path you run. Run. Run until the pain is undone. Runaway until the pain is effaced. Run, runaway .... You'll return another day. When the wounds have healed. And your heart knows just how to deal. [ I started raping to this as i was writing it, lol. First time for a rap song ] |
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nicely done |
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Thank you. You're always around aren't you? BTW, nice write on your last posted poem.
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Thank you. You're always around aren't you? BTW, nice write on your last posted poem. no, not always but, the blackberry does help...lol |
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Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow.
Disregard today and focus on the sorrow. shouldnt it be Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow. Disregard today and dont focus on the sorrow. just makes more sence to me i like this re-write tho, but i like all your stuff |
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Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow. Disregard today and focus on the sorrow. shouldnt it be Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow. Disregard today and dont focus on the sorrow. just makes more sence to me i like this re-write tho, but i like all your stuff Your re-write does make sense, but it's not about running away from pain. It's about focusing on the pain in order to heal |
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Thank you. You're always around aren't you? BTW, nice write on your last posted poem. no, not always but, the blackberry does help...lol lol, yeah I suppose it would |
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She's a loner by nature and a runaway at heart. She's disastrous by force, right from the start. She gave it her best while ditching temptation. And those years of trying never gave any elation. Now that she's had some years to rest, it's time to keep running. Run, runaway and never look back. Forget about the motivation you have always lacked. Nothing else matters expect the path you run. Run. Run until the pain is undone. Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow. Disregard today and focus on the sorrow. Run, runaway and never look back. Forget about the motivation you have always lacked. Nothing else matters expect the path you run. Run. Run until the pain is undone. Runaway until the pain is effaced. Run, runaway .... You'll return another day. When the wounds have healed. And your heart knows just how to deal. [ I started raping to this as i was writing it, lol. First time for a rap song ] Well you laid it down. Good job. |
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Thanks Mz
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