Topic: Runaway
WolfEyez's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:28 PM
Edited by WolfEyez on Wed 09/02/09 07:28 PM
She's a loner by nature and a runaway at heart.
She's disastrous by force, right from the start.
She gave it her best while ditching temptation.
And those years of trying never gave any elation.

Now that she's had some years to rest, it's time to keep running.

Run, runaway and never look back.
Forget about the motivation you have always lacked.
Nothing else matters expect the path you run.
Run. Run until the pain is undone.

Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow.
Disregard today and focus on the sorrow.

Run, runaway and never look back.
Forget about the motivation you have always lacked.
Nothing else matters expect the path you run.
Run. Run until the pain is undone.

Runaway until the pain is effaced.
Run, runaway ....

You'll return another day.
When the wounds have healed.
And your heart knows just how to deal.



[ I started raping to this as i was writing it, lol. First time for a rap song ]

kc0003's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:29 PM
flowerforyou

nicely done

WolfEyez's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:31 PM
Thank you. You're always around aren't you? BTW, nice write on your last posted poem.

kc0003's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:38 PM

Thank you. You're always around aren't you? BTW, nice write on your last posted poem.



no, not always
but, the blackberry does help...lol

lonetar25's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:38 PM
Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow.
Disregard today and focus on the sorrow.

shouldnt it be


Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow.
Disregard today and dont focus on the sorrow.

just makes more sence to me flowerforyou

i like this re-write tho, but i like all your stuff

WolfEyez's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:40 PM

Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow.
Disregard today and focus on the sorrow.

shouldnt it be


Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow.
Disregard today and dont focus on the sorrow.

just makes more sence to me flowerforyou

i like this re-write tho, but i like all your stuff


Your re-write does make sense, but it's not about running away from pain. It's about focusing on the pain in order to heal

WolfEyez's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:41 PM


Thank you. You're always around aren't you? BTW, nice write on your last posted poem.



no, not always
but, the blackberry does help...lol


lol, yeah I suppose it would

MzEm's photo
Thu 09/03/09 01:19 PM

She's a loner by nature and a runaway at heart.
She's disastrous by force, right from the start.
She gave it her best while ditching temptation.
And those years of trying never gave any elation.

Now that she's had some years to rest, it's time to keep running.

Run, runaway and never look back.
Forget about the motivation you have always lacked.
Nothing else matters expect the path you run.
Run. Run until the pain is undone.

Forget about yesterday and don't think about tomorrow.
Disregard today and focus on the sorrow.

Run, runaway and never look back.
Forget about the motivation you have always lacked.
Nothing else matters expect the path you run.
Run. Run until the pain is undone.

Runaway until the pain is effaced.
Run, runaway ....

You'll return another day.
When the wounds have healed.
And your heart knows just how to deal.



[ I started raping to this as i was writing it, lol. First time for a rap song ]


Well you laid it down. Good job.

WolfEyez's photo
Thu 09/03/09 03:13 PM
Thanks Mz

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 09/03/09 06:36 PM
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