Topic: My turn...Lets here some criticism please. | |
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Please let me know what need/do not need. Anything will be appreciated. Thank you :-)
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Looks good to me
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Well...
Ya cant really loose with the military pics, and you are super cute soo.. ya know unless im Jeanine Garrofalo or something your great. |
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Edited by
lilith401
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Mon 08/31/09 12:18 PM
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What a cutie.....
But the short sentences and lack of much information needs some serious attention. |
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hear*
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Ladies, is there anything better than a man in uniform????
Darlin' U wanna join my male harem???? On a serious note. Blackhawks huh? My oldest son is an Apache mechanic in the Army stationed at Ft. Carson Thank u for ur service |
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You are in the military? Gosh would have never guessed. Stateing the obvious makes you sound a little dense which I REALLY doubt. Drop one BDU pick for a dress uniform.
Better yet add lots of pics in civilian clothing that reflects your civilian interests. Show those eyes and SMILE. Bet you have great legs; show them in some full length shots. Your text gives good information but it sounds like you are writing and EER report or barking oders not talking to a woman. Reword some of the sentences so all don't start with "I". The comment about your kids is very good; don't mess with that. Maybe explaining some of your art interests would be good. |
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Ok first, thank you! The compliments are very nice :-D. I changed a couple of things, added some pictures of my tattoos. I'll soon start adding some civilian clothes pictures. I dont really have any,
I'll have to take some. I dont really take pictures of myself. But again, let me know if I need to add/take anything to/from my profile. Thank you all! |
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