Topic: My turn...Lets here some criticism please.
imagelost's photo
Mon 08/31/09 11:51 AM
Please let me know what need/do not need. Anything will be appreciated. Thank you :-)

writer_gurl's photo
Mon 08/31/09 11:56 AM
Looks good to me:thumbsup:

earthytaurus76's photo
Mon 08/31/09 11:59 AM
Well...


Ya cant really loose with the military pics, and you are super cute soo.. ya know unless im Jeanine Garrofalo or something your great.

lilith401's photo
Mon 08/31/09 12:07 PM
Edited by lilith401 on Mon 08/31/09 12:18 PM
What a cutie.....

But the short sentences and lack of much information needs some serious attention.

no photo
Mon 08/31/09 12:17 PM
hear*

no photo
Mon 08/31/09 12:25 PM
flowers

ReddBeans's photo
Mon 08/31/09 12:29 PM
Ladies, is there anything better than a man in uniform????


Darlin' U wanna join my male harem????


On a serious note. Blackhawks huh? My oldest son is an Apache mechanic in the Army stationed at Ft. Carsondrinker


Thank u for ur serviceflowers

PacificStar48's photo
Mon 08/31/09 01:02 PM
You are in the military? Gosh would have never guessed. Stateing the obvious makes you sound a little dense which I REALLY doubt. Drop one BDU pick for a dress uniform.

Better yet add lots of pics in civilian clothing that reflects your civilian interests. Show those eyes and SMILE. Bet you have great legs; show them in some full length shots.

Your text gives good information but it sounds like you are writing and EER report or barking oders not talking to a woman. Reword some of the sentences so all don't start with "I". The comment about your kids is very good; don't mess with that. Maybe explaining some of your art interests would be good.


imagelost's photo
Mon 08/31/09 08:06 PM
Ok first, thank you! The compliments are very nice :-D. I changed a couple of things, added some pictures of my tattoos. I'll soon start adding some civilian clothes pictures. I dont really have any,
I'll have to take some. I dont really take pictures of myself. But again, let me know if I need to add/take anything to/from my profile. Thank you all!