from a speck of dust, you are a substance.
as time ages, you are an object.
you are solid and cold to the touch.
with a out voice, you can be heard from a distances.
clear and well define sharper than a knife, yet love by all eyes.
you are shallow but deeper than deepest sea, poison deep within.
as the sun meet the sky, your the center of the crowed.
the power you bring make a woman lost in world we called reality.
sparkles hidden deep inside, came out a rainbow.
you are rare, rank higher than any object existed admires by air.
dangerous, cunning, silent but deadly just one look.
you are what we human called, a die man.

i just want to know what i wrote make any since
im not a writer and if it dose make since than i continue to write.



thank you 2kidsmom

Yes, it did.Wonderful write.
Please continue to post.

thank you

Wow Wonderer... I knew you were full of such beauty!! Weeeeee! Awesome, love your comparisons, sparkles in the cave to a rainbow outside! Very nice.. I will look forward to the next post!!
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