my skins my only shield, and to this rythem i am breaking, where was the compasson in the eyes of whom was breaking me
considering the fact that this altercation had become deadly, i had begun realizing it was far to late to ****ing leave,
i uncontrollably begin to stab,
my eyes are my only stronghold and to this blade i am towards death, bleed out tinting vision, creeping gate, and i am almost home, again i am wrong knowing of only one solution,
i uncontrollably begin to stab,
you would do the same, with a certainty wouldnt you?

great write!! I know your pain all to well.

Nice!!!

pain is my savior.

since i cant post any more for a while i will write another one in here, its called once--
open my body, so i can feel whats within, opening my chest so i can feel beneathe the skin, helpign me to remeber, just what once happened, i feel it coming on again
my lady ive found my place within,

god help m down if you can see past my sins, god let me down so i can live again, i feel your sodomy, it pierces through me aswell, god help us down so we can love again
my lady ive found my place within

in the eye of our storm, untill along comes the drout, ill hlp forget whats been going on, atleast for now, i feel almost whole, complete my circle, by telling me how you feel,
my lady ive found my place within,

this love, it burns, strikes you down, this love, i kills, and yes it is for real, i nevr asked for more, i never tried to consume, i only found the world, bby losing my self, ths love, was my consequence can you tell me, was it yours aswell?
my love, i found my plce in life.

Welcome to the poetry section

thank you very much =] i didnt notice it here for a while hehe

heres an old one all these im posting are songs that i have made they include music =p its called -every moment-
promise every moment magic, promise every kiss like first, promise only smiles made, promise my life only after yours, your the truereason for me to get up, the only reason i go on, promise alwaysbeing there,like i should have before, promise never a broken heart, promise a forever-more,--i ****ed up, i know, but does that cange all that came before? i messed up i know, but does it all change what was said before? only one lin crossed, now all is lost and done, this isnt what should have happened, created by my own hands, rediculous, i could care for a bit better judgement, solve this mistake, i must fix, i could use some understanding, id smelt this all away, into something so much more then what it once was, amazed id just smelt it all away, just to see what else i could create, thus eventually becoming whole, enough to bring me to your center, enough to give you anything you would wat, enough to call upon myself, to do itall just for you,