the dead, arise, to kill off my spirit, why mustthe dead return, only to bring me under, i obide, but i shall, consider this as only my way to progress, and bring myself above your standards, a breaking mind, taking lives, seeks for nothign less then souls, but now is the time and im finding myself further below, the tides, rise, my tease,

uplifting, undrpinning, beautiful and terrifying, all in the same, this one, and whole, this monster and beauty, the wheight of the world, could never be quite too much,

within this end chymes, a magnetic, unconditional attraction, ive been key'd th wrong direction and im at the beginning, wondering, just where i have been, the dead, have killed me, the soul-less have stolen, but here i am, coherent and understanding, the dead, rise, the dead are rising, the dead arise, andleave me nothing,

uplifting. underpinning. your beautiful and terrifying, all i the same, your one, and whole, my monster, and beauty. the wheight of the world coul never be, quite to much. -joey

a stimulation of pain consumes me, illusive hands of "god" force me down, some sort of rythem sings through me, and all around crashes down,
i felt it like the world was coming down, being as only the witness i still felt the pain,
coming down, my body is so weak, i can see the refletions bend revealing all to me, coming down, my bodys so damn weak, drownding as his reflection begins bending revealing it all to me
i felt it like the world was coming down being as only the wittness i still felt the pain
history unwinds leaving from its final fraction, everything grows down, and the old grow in, thinking its kinda weird how im standing here just watching,
vass and so cold gd let these visions go, empty and so dan flawwed, why do we live this way out of all the possibilities..
worthless then a dead pawn within the melody of this blank rythem, now instead of hope and honor i behold just a smelt of iron.

Quite pulling write. I've noticed you're really good at graphic writing.

P.S. what does wow=o mean?

wow means your poetry gave me the chills, it was very good