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Topic: paralizing beauty.
bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 08/22/09 05:33 PM
stunned into silence, lost in my head, i try to walk straight, but stumble instead, my vision grow cloudy, my tongue becomes thick, i cant utter a sound, if i do it'll stick, clawing my chest, gasping for air, i want to breathe, but do not dare, afraid if i turn, you'll disappear, and i will miss the beauty, that is you my dear,

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Sat 08/22/09 05:35 PM
very nice

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 08/22/09 05:37 PM
very nice thank u

redhead44613 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 12976	Sat 08/22/09 05:41 PM
awww whoever you wrote that for is one lucky lady.

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Sat 08/22/09 05:42 PM
very nice thank u Your welcome

trgirl Joined Tue 01/20/09 Posts: 2368	Sat 08/22/09 06:02 PM
all i can say is WOW! nice

greeneyedlady42 Joined Wed 07/26/06 Posts: 975	Sun 08/23/09 05:25 AM
Where did you come from and are there more like you there?

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sun 08/23/09 09:26 AM
Where did you come from and are there more like you there? im just a hopeless romantic.that catches the things other people miss or take for granted

msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Sun 08/23/09 09:26 AM
Very nice

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Sun 08/23/09 09:31 AM
Hey bedlum Gotta say this (not flirting. Your to young. LOL) First. You are really good looking!! Second. Your writes are really good. You should be scooped up fairly soon I think!!! LOL. LOL.

LightVoice Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 7405	Sun 08/23/09 10:31 AM
stunned into silence, lost in my head, i try to walk straight, but stumble instead, my vision grow cloudy, my tongue becomes thick, i cant utter a sound, if i do it'll stick, clawing my chest, gasping for air, i want to breathe, but do not dare, afraid if i turn, you'll disappear, and i will miss the beauty, that is you my dear,

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sun 08/23/09 11:04 AM
Hey bedlum Gotta say this (not flirting. Your to young. LOL) First. You are really good looking!! Second. Your writes are really good. You should be scooped up fairly soon I think!!! LOL. LOL. that would b nice and age is a state mind

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 04/03/10 07:14 PM
doin a little archeology lol

Sashalynn Joined Sat 02/27/10 Posts: 57	Sat 04/03/10 07:25 PM
Your words are so touching and capture one thing or another that everyone here has had the pleasure of feeling or who indeed want to. Thank you again for a beautiful write... Sash

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Sat 04/03/10 07:28 PM
Your words are so touching and capture one thing or another that everyone here has had the pleasure of feeling or who indeed want to. Thank you again for a beautiful write... Sash

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