Topic: Vampire of the night
redhead44613's photo
Sat 08/22/09 01:54 PM
She walks slowly behind him
Stalking his every move.
He has no clue
They turn into a dark ally
She crouches down waiting
Hissing through her razor sharp teeth
Church bells ring in the distance
The vampire of the night a waits her pray.
Her fire like hair blows in the breeze
His smell floods her nose
The smell of iron, starts to drive her crazy
Her hissing becomes louder
He turns hearing her,
He walks faster trying to get away
Little does he know, she is now in front of him
As he turns back round
He is face to face with the killer
He stares into her blood red eyes
"This won't hurt to much" she hisses at him
She crouches down once again
Leaping through the air
Grabs his head pulling it to the side
Her breath on his neck
She hums a soft tune
The last tune he will ever hear
Teeth ripping at his neck
A scream is hear but fades to only a whimper
The blood that gave him life now kills him.

redhead44613devil

Gossipmpm's photo
Sat 08/22/09 01:58 PM
Very

Very

Very

Good!

jacko667's photo
Sat 08/22/09 01:59 PM
that was cool

redhead44613's photo
Sat 08/22/09 01:59 PM
thank you

bedlum1's photo
Sat 08/22/09 02:04 PM
pitchfork

elwoodsully's photo
Sat 08/22/09 02:08 PM
Dayum.. Great write..

I give it 2 :thumbsup:

dolphin29's photo
Sat 08/22/09 02:42 PM
That was good.happy

darkowl1's photo
Sat 08/22/09 03:01 PM
nice vamp! powerful......drinker

redhead44613's photo
Sat 08/22/09 04:14 PM
devil I am in a really dark mood tonight.. an Im gonna drink.. look out guys!! devil